Stains of You

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If my glances were a canvas,
Dissolved in colours of your smile,
In the pale redness of your cheeks and,
Drenched in the rainbow of Dreams while,
Fading into the forsaken strokes of goodbyes,
Skirting the unwithdrawing stains .
Those Stains of You!

If my voice was a refrain,
With broken lyrics running out of symphony,
Murmuring the ruins of your evocative baritone,
Playing silently through the lengths
Of the castellated regions of my Promises.
Intersecting the depths the stains have left.
Those Stains of You!

If my Love was an unpatterned novel,
Blank pages.Scribbled Poems.
Incoherent words.Incomplete preface,
And few unspoken lines
Crumbled up in the tear soaked folds
Melting in the tenderness of the author’s pen,
Unravelling those deep blotted stains.
Those stains of You!

If finally my life was an Art.
Maiden serenity masking the widening abyss,
Impure radiance guarding the naked Hopes!
As I lie unfathomable to many,
But to one,
Waiting to be decoded by you.
Secretly stagnating in those deliberate stains
Those Few Stains of You!

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  1. Every single line carries a very deep meaning and yes if this was in your handwriting, I think it would have been a classic collection.

    Your brain weaves words like a Weaver Bird!

    Are you naturalist, I wonder if my vocab will ever become so strong.

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    1. I am floating on the ninth cloud now..such kind words push me to write better! You made my day! You can suggest me words/phrases..I will be glad to write on them!
      You are one such reader who helps me grow..Thanks a ton !

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      1. Float higher to reach beyond the atmosphere into the space.
        I have been getting this response often now, of making someone’s day. I feel so happy to that. I guess it’s just my reflections getting stronger every single day.

        Here you go with the words –
        Serenity
        Ego
        Purpose
        Sibling Rivalry
        Donating your wealth
        Old Age – A curse

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      2. I know, its feels really awesome when fellow bloggers say that our words made them smile!
        And THANKS A BUNCH for these words! I have exams coming up, but as soon as I am able to write something on them I will blog it with link to your blog! πŸ™‚

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    1. Thanks a ton…I really value your comments!
      Well, it wasn’t entirely written for someone! But somewhere his ways did influence me a lot..
      And yes, He was thrilled and amazed!
      But, how did you guess out his reaction?

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    1. I am honoured…Eternally thankful that I have a Brilliant friend like you..Your comment makes me feel like, ” There, There comes the sweetest lady of my life..See my dear bloggers all around th world..Its her!”
      Thank you once again…And after all “stained” was your suggestion! :*

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      1. This reply just made my day ! And I m like ” there there bloggers ..THE lady of this blog just gave me such a reply !” I m the one honoured here seriously :* u r loved more than u can ever imagine

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      2. You always make me smile effortlessly..
        And I guess Silence is better now..Words can’t fill in or interpret!
        ( missing the Pusheen sticker which I would have used now)

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      1. I really appreciate what you did.you are a very good writer.The only reason i did not comment on all your poems is like me you are not using simple english words :).so some of your poems are really tough for me to understand.But i will give it a try πŸ™‚

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      2. Well..Some Brilliant writer friends around me took pride on their Brilliant vocab..And that pushed me to learn some more..And they aren’t tough words, Google helped me there as well!
        And I really appreciate your honest views and comments!! And I will try to use better words..thanks for the feedback!

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    1. I am really glad that you loved it. I am out of blogging for few days now, I look forward to writing some more soon – I hope you will like them. It was really great to know you. Stay in touch.
      Thank you for the follow. Have a nice day.!

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      1. Oh Brilliant. Our ancestral roots are in Bangladesh. And we are planning to visit Bangladesh soon as well! See, this is the power of blogging. We can share our thoughts all across the globe. Glad to find you! Are you planning to visit Kolkata ?

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    1. Thanks a lot…I am so happy that such honest readers like you have come across and found it good..And yes definitely I will try to write more and more better stuffs…Thank you again!

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  2. Though I have no authority to judge you but even being a natural average human being who have no skills to analyze but being a incompetent reader I must say you are simply outstanding . I stand up and bow down my egoist head in your praise with my not so good hand I clap for you till time they feel uncomfortable . I hope sound my applause will reach to you as good vibration which you feel after reading my comments. I have put my best efforts to appreciate this poem. Hope my words will match standard of your poem.

    Excellent. Wonderful. Amazing. Beautiful. Perfect with all other words which I don’t know but present in the purview of this language.

    Keep writing. Stay blessed.

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    1. WELL… You have left me in lose of words. Readers and amazing bloggers like you rekindle the hope each time I think I am losing out on writing. Nobody has been this appreciative. How much thankful I am you have no idea about. Stay connected and we hope to interact further in future πŸ™‚

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